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　　Today, my dancing class was(/is) over, but I really don't want it over. Sometimes I even wanted it to start again.

　　When the winter vacation beginning, I left school for home. In my opinion, besides the homework I should do something to let myself have a good time and lose weight as well. So I enrolled a class of Korean Dancing.

　　During these five days I did a lot of exercise. It was very interesting but it also made me very tired. However, I very much love it and I am sure that, in the future, I shall do much better.

　　能写出来就不错,意思大致还可以,修改的地方不一定都完全确切,有时间审视、体会一下,语言就在于长期的学习与练习、修正与改正,复习与提高. GOOD LUCK

1.my dancing class 2.but i don’t finish it。sometimes，i want to start it again。3.when the winter vacation comes。4.i go back to home from school。5. 。。。。。。越看越凌乱啊孩子。

。。。。亲你作文在哪？这不就来了Today,my dancing class has been over,but i hope not.sometimes,i want it could start again. when the winter vacation began ,i came back home . in my opinion, except doing the homework...

Today,my dancing(动名词修饰) class was over,but I do not want it over sometimes,when the winter vacation is beginning ，I want it start again。 I leave school to home .In my opinion, in addition to(except一般位...