请您帮我改一下英语作文,我想知道得分低的原因!老师给了15分
请您帮我改一下英语作文,我想知道得分低的原因!老师给了15分
根据汉语提示,以Protecting environment is saving ourselves 为题写篇100词左右的短文,号召人们起来保护环境.
1、 环境污染对人类危害极大,据说每年有数以万计的人死于污染引起的疾病.
2、 由于森林的破坏,世界沙化面积扩大,气候更加恶劣,如此下去,这个世界将不适合我们生活了.
3、 工厂排出的废气废液污染了空气和江河,如今世人都渴望得到清洁的空气,宜人的气候和干净的饮用水.
4、 幸好现在越来越多的人认识到了这个问题的严重性,并努力采取措施来保护环境.
答：Protecting environment is Saving ourselves.
Man is now facing a big problem about environment which is more serious thing in our daily life.
Environment pollution is bad for Man,s health..It is said that hundreds of people died due to polluted.Forest be broken by people..Weather has become warming and warming..However air also was polluted by some company.Many people hope breathe Fresh air and drink clean water.If we continue to polluted the earth that can’t be suitable live in.
Fortunately,More and More people realized this serious problem and take measures to project environment.
In a word,protecting environment is saving ourselves!
根据汉语提示,以Protecting environment is saving ourselves 为题写篇100词左右的短文,号召人们起来保护环境.
1、 环境污染对人类危害极大,据说每年有数以万计的人死于污染引起的疾病.
2、 由于森林的破坏,世界沙化面积扩大,气候更加恶劣,如此下去,这个世界将不适合我们生活了.
3、 工厂排出的废气废液污染了空气和江河,如今世人都渴望得到清洁的空气,宜人的气候和干净的饮用水.
4、 幸好现在越来越多的人认识到了这个问题的严重性,并努力采取措施来保护环境.
答：Protecting environment is Saving ourselves.
Man is now facing a big problem about environment which is more serious thing in our daily life.
Environment pollution is bad for Man,s health..It is said that hundreds of people died due to polluted.Forest be broken by people..Weather has become warming and warming..However air also was polluted by some company.Many people hope breathe Fresh air and drink clean water.If we continue to polluted the earth that can’t be suitable live in.
Fortunately,More and More people realized this serious problem and take measures to project environment.
In a word,protecting environment is saving ourselves!
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Humans are facing a big problem about the environment, which is a really serious thing in our daily life.
Pollution is bad for human health. It is said that millions of people died due to pollution every year. Forests are broken down to build cities and the cities' pollution are forming more deserts. The weather is turning warmer and warmer, causing a problem we call "Global Warming".The air and water (rivers) are also polluted by factories. Many people hope to breathe fresh air and drink clean water, but in some places this small wish is not even possible. If this continues, planet earth won't be suitable to live on anymore.
Fortunately, more people have realized how serious the problem is and are tying to help.
In other words, protecting environment is saving ourselves.
你们老师男的女的?女的看到你的作文肯定很生气,你作文里把人类都写成男的了. 低分的原因应该是你语法方面有点问题.不过我也不敢确定我能的满分,我用的是美式语法.
Pollution is bad for human health. It is said that millions of people died due to pollution every year. Forests are broken down to build cities and the cities' pollution are forming more deserts. The weather is turning warmer and warmer, causing a problem we call "Global Warming".The air and water (rivers) are also polluted by factories. Many people hope to breathe fresh air and drink clean water, but in some places this small wish is not even possible. If this continues, planet earth won't be suitable to live on anymore.
Fortunately, more people have realized how serious the problem is and are tying to help.
In other words, protecting environment is saving ourselves.
你们老师男的女的?女的看到你的作文肯定很生气,你作文里把人类都写成男的了. 低分的原因应该是你语法方面有点问题.不过我也不敢确定我能的满分,我用的是美式语法.
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