帮我修改英文文章!~~~此为我这礼拜4的一童年为主题presentation的一部分,讲的是卡通,希望修改的没有语法错误
帮我修改英文文章!~~~
此为我这礼拜4的一童年为主题presentation的一部分,讲的是卡通,希望修改的没有语法错误,并且,弄点好词好句啊之类的,我只会用很简单很直白的表述.
谢谢!尽快
There is one thing that almost everyone here have been addicted to it in your childhood, because of it , we forgot to have dinner ,we forgot to do our homework, and even, we cry for it, we smile for it. Now, I still love it, ladies and gentlemen, guess what it is? it is cartoon
Let’s recall the cartoon we watched in our childhood, I think you must be familiar to it!
The first one is pretty solider sailor moon, do you remember sailor moon’s typical sentence? I like impersonating her when I was very young. In the name of the moon, I’ll publish you! At that time, I think the sailor moon is very beautiful, the Tuxedo Mask is very handsome, now, let’s see the photo, what do you think of it now? um.to be honest, the image is quite different
The next is the detective cornan, the typical sentence is there is always just one truth !do you know the typical person in this cartoon? ,he is a man who wear a black clothes ,always like killing people. in fact ,I am afraid to watch it alone.
There are many other cartoons we watched in our childhood,for instance,card captor sakura, Children of Cucurbit, doreamon, dragon ball, slam dunk…and so on
As a matter of fact ,contrary to what we like in our childhood ,we pay more attention to the realistic life rather than the magical world,you can not see a university man pick up a doll very seriously and shouted to kill the monster, because we all know that there is no monster in the world. But from cartoon, we can see the inner thoughts when we are young ,we are curious, imaginative, righteous.
As time elapse, we are now university student, but we can still remember the good time in our childhood,
此为我这礼拜4的一童年为主题presentation的一部分,讲的是卡通,希望修改的没有语法错误,并且,弄点好词好句啊之类的,我只会用很简单很直白的表述.
谢谢!尽快
There is one thing that almost everyone here have been addicted to it in your childhood, because of it , we forgot to have dinner ,we forgot to do our homework, and even, we cry for it, we smile for it. Now, I still love it, ladies and gentlemen, guess what it is? it is cartoon
Let’s recall the cartoon we watched in our childhood, I think you must be familiar to it!
The first one is pretty solider sailor moon, do you remember sailor moon’s typical sentence? I like impersonating her when I was very young. In the name of the moon, I’ll publish you! At that time, I think the sailor moon is very beautiful, the Tuxedo Mask is very handsome, now, let’s see the photo, what do you think of it now? um.to be honest, the image is quite different
The next is the detective cornan, the typical sentence is there is always just one truth !do you know the typical person in this cartoon? ,he is a man who wear a black clothes ,always like killing people. in fact ,I am afraid to watch it alone.
There are many other cartoons we watched in our childhood,for instance,card captor sakura, Children of Cucurbit, doreamon, dragon ball, slam dunk…and so on
As a matter of fact ,contrary to what we like in our childhood ,we pay more attention to the realistic life rather than the magical world,you can not see a university man pick up a doll very seriously and shouted to kill the monster, because we all know that there is no monster in the world. But from cartoon, we can see the inner thoughts when we are young ,we are curious, imaginative, righteous.
As time elapse, we are now university student, but we can still remember the good time in our childhood,
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There is one thing that almost everyone were or are addicted to in their childhood. Because of it, we would ignore regular meals, school work, and we would even cry for it; but when we get to watch it, we would become happy. That, my friends, is cartoon.
Let's recall the cartoon we have watched in our childhood.The first one is pretty solider "Sailor Moon"; do you still remember the famous quote in it? "In the name of the moon, I’ll publish you!"; I used to imitate the protagonist and say it aloud when I was a kid because I think she is very charming.
Next cartoon, also a famous one, is "Detective Conan". I remember that he would always say "There is only one truth!". Although It was enjoyable, the series always involve murder incidents that Conan, the protagonist boy, encounters. As a result, I was afraid to watch it alone. There are other cartoons we watched in our childhood that are still popular; for example, card captor sakura, doraemon, dragon ball, and et cetera.
In contrast to what we liked in our childhood, we pay more attention to the real world rather than the virtual/animated world. It is not likely to find a grown-up carrying a doll or trying to hunt for monsters that do not exist because we know that cartoon monsters do not exist. However, the monsters represent our winsome insights as children; we were curious, creative, and righteous. Despite that we are adults now, we can still look back and enjoy our precious memory of being that kind of children.
你英文structure很差, grammar也很差, 标点符号都错得糟糕
Let's recall the cartoon we have watched in our childhood.The first one is pretty solider "Sailor Moon"; do you still remember the famous quote in it? "In the name of the moon, I’ll publish you!"; I used to imitate the protagonist and say it aloud when I was a kid because I think she is very charming.
Next cartoon, also a famous one, is "Detective Conan". I remember that he would always say "There is only one truth!". Although It was enjoyable, the series always involve murder incidents that Conan, the protagonist boy, encounters. As a result, I was afraid to watch it alone. There are other cartoons we watched in our childhood that are still popular; for example, card captor sakura, doraemon, dragon ball, and et cetera.
In contrast to what we liked in our childhood, we pay more attention to the real world rather than the virtual/animated world. It is not likely to find a grown-up carrying a doll or trying to hunt for monsters that do not exist because we know that cartoon monsters do not exist. However, the monsters represent our winsome insights as children; we were curious, creative, and righteous. Despite that we are adults now, we can still look back and enjoy our precious memory of being that kind of children.
你英文structure很差, grammar也很差, 标点符号都错得糟糕
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