找出下面的错处,并改正 :Last week,I paid visit to Beijing.I'd always lo
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Last week,I paid visit to Beijing.I'd always looked forward to visit the great city.So I was too excited that I couldn't fall sleep on night before I started.I get up early and packed my backpack for the journey.In my pack,I put away a camera,a cell phone and some clothes.It took myself 35 hours to get here by train.I visited some piace of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Ming Tombs and so on.I felt tiring but happy because I had learned a lot about the history of the city.
Last week,I paid visit to Beijing.I'd always looked forward to visit the great city.So I was too excited that I couldn't fall sleep on night before I started.I get up early and packed my backpack for the journey.In my pack,I put away a camera,a cell phone and some clothes.It took myself 35 hours to get here by train.I visited some piace of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Ming Tombs and so on.I felt tiring but happy because I had learned a lot about the history of the city.
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Last week,I paid a visit to Beijing.I'd always looked forward to visiting the great city.So I was too excited that I couldn't fall asleep at night before I started.I get up early and packed my backpack for the journey.In my pack,I put in a camera,a cell phone and some clothes.It took me 35 hours to get there by train.I visited some piace of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Ming Tombs and so on.I felt tired but happy because I have learned a lot about the history of the city.希望我不会错很多,
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