短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的

短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my
reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was
happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many
peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through
the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and
carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
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Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually . At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a
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lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking
2. when3. heard 4. shocked
to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
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anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the
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water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
8. my
I was proud∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
9. of 10. hope

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